+1 bonus point for using my planet trick.
Hmm, this one was a lot more straight forward than a lot of your stuff. Still good though. I really liked the detail in the explosions and some of the vehicles.
Your stuff just keeps getting better, man. If I could think of something to improve, maybe it would be... modular characters? Characters composed of several pieces so it's easier for you to animate them smoothly.
Wrong area of the site.
If you're going to have a long, pointless, obvious rant about how the media doesn't actually care about the people affected by the stories that they report, we have a section of the site for that.
It's called the BBS.
The portal is for animation. This was not animated. Try to remember that next time.
Nice try, but no cigar.
I realize you tried to pluck on the heartstrings of the viewers, but I see this for what it really is, a shitty montage of tweened pictures behind a translucent picture of the US flag.
Not really worth the score it's getting, since you didn't create any of the content in this movie.
And don't try to brush me off as a Bush supporter or something stupid, I hate Bush and I'm anti-war, but that doesn't mean I want you crapping up the portal with a bunch of pictures you found on google to the tune of some sappy sad song.
In other words: There was nothign I particularly liked about this flash, if you want to improve, I suggest actual animation or work of some kind.
youre right, I am not actually physically in Iraq, therefore I did not create any of the content...
but I still think it is a good message... Plus, this flash did take some time to put together...
How could it have taken five people?
Seriously, this could use improvement in every category. I imagine the work for this being split up like one person owning MS paint, on person with no hands doing the drawing, on person owning a microphone, one person owning the microwave the the sounds were recorded inside of, and one person owning a copy of flash to cobble this monstrosity together.
Seriously, it's been done many times before, and this movie had the potential to be another funny livecorpse movie, if it wasn't so damned incomprehensible. Generally, in a collaboration, people play to their strengths, that's why there's multiple people involved. This looks like the five people were five starving monkeys thrown into a sack with a dozen squirrels and a computer, and this movie was the result of the random noises, keystrokes, and mouse movements.
Just try to improve that, and you'll be fine.
Some comments and a question...
I thought it was pretty good, a bit strange and somewhat choppy, but not anything disagreeable to watch. Just keep working on developing your skills and ou should do pretty well.
Also, I've been trying to find out what that song is called and who it's by for a couple of years now, mind telling me?
texas faggot did the song, but i dont know the name, i just recorded the song myself. if u add me on AIM or something, i'l be glad to send it to you, PS thanks 4 review
I liked how you added the option thing at the end
But really, the idea was just ripped off of Squigo.
Of course, you did come up with more endings, and you did all new graphics, and that's really the bulk of the work.
Good job, just try to be a tad more original :)
HOLY SHIT DRIVER'S LICENSE HAHAHAHA
Man, that was the funniest fucking inside joke ON THE PLANET.
I liked your style of animation and drawings, there's not much I can tell you to improve in this movie. Keep using subtitles, that worked great.
I guess all you can do is keep making flash and let your style get more polished over time.
One of my all-time favourites!
I'm not sure what it is about this movie, but it's great and it's fun to watch. It's really a shame that not too many people saw it.
This was so fucking funny for a short.
I don't know how you could put something this funny into a movie this short, but you did it.
Wow, just like a real online game of WarCraft!
OHHHHHH SNAP! You're a fucking genius, man!
You know, everything in this movie is great. If you had flashed up the graphics a little on those characters, this would be an EASY top 50 movie. I think it actually deserves a top 50 spot the way it is now. You just made my favourite authors list, man!
I actually made the two main characters without a lot of detail on purpose. It's supposed to visually exemplify the fact that they are so boring (or "plain" and "bland") that all they do is watch TV and disprove crazy internet rumors. It's a little difficult to get that since none of the minor characters required a lot of detailed animation, so there was nothing to compare them to.
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